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#1 Soaa-

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Posted 10 August 2009 - 05:57 PM

Here's my latest creation in web development, a website for my ex-boss and now client.

http://technorecharge.ca

For now it's just a static website in plain XHTML+CSS and a bit of JS, but we plan on creating a dynamic site with a searchable database in the future.

Please comment/critique! Layout is still subject to changes as the site matures and as we approach the store opening date.
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#2 Randallrocks

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Posted 10 August 2009 - 06:34 PM

It's nice, but get rid of all the green except in the logo. It's eew. madmush42vx.gif


#3 Soaa-

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Posted 10 August 2009 - 09:30 PM

You think? The entire store is painted with the grey from "Techno" and the green from "Recharge." Green has its place, but maybe it should go somewhere else? Anyway, I'll tinker.
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Posted 10 August 2009 - 10:25 PM

I think that the green belongs somewhere on there, but where it's placed now makes it look overdone.


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Posted 11 August 2009 - 01:26 AM

Niceeeeee.
I really like it, especially the colour-paint-tree thing.

You should rethink the font and the colour of navigation, though.
Also, it might be just me, but there's way too much space at the bottom. I think it should be cut off where the "horizon" is?

#6 Soaa-

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Posted 11 August 2009 - 11:02 AM

Cool. Green's mostly gone and font on the menubar is improved. More feedback? Client likes it so far. (:
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Posted 11 August 2009 - 05:20 PM

Ooh, I like.


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Posted 12 August 2009 - 10:16 AM

What kind of website is it?
It's pretty nice. :0

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Posted 13 August 2009 - 10:47 PM

QUOTE(Suri @ Aug 11 2009, 01:26 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Niceeeeee.
I really like it, especially the colour-paint-tree thing.

You should rethink the font and the colour of navigation, though.
Also, it might be just me, but there's way too much space at the bottom. I think it should be cut off where the "horizon" is?


This. Get rid of some of the space or add some more stuff to it.

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#10 Randallrocks

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Posted 13 August 2009 - 10:51 PM

Move the logo to the right just a tiny bit. It'd look better.


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Posted 13 August 2009 - 11:02 PM

QUOTE(Randallrocks @ Aug 14 2009, 04:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Move the logo to the right just a tiny bit. It'd look better.

This.

#12 Soaa-

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Posted 14 August 2009 - 10:20 PM

I'm actually probably going to make the logo bigger, and the slideshow a bit flatter.
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Posted 20 August 2009 - 10:29 PM

QUOTE(Suri @ Aug 11 2009, 03:26 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Also, it might be just me, but there's way too much space at the bottom. I think it should be cut off where the "horizon" is?


I agree.
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