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#1 maybeupthere

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Posted 16 August 2009 - 05:27 PM

Drawn and colored while watching Lisa Lamponelli attempt to be funny.



Decent? Horrible? Made your eyes bleed? Tell me, I'm curious.



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#2 Randallrocks

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Posted 16 August 2009 - 10:16 PM

Decent, but the sword is slightly curved and the sprite needs work.

7.8/10


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Posted 17 August 2009 - 02:51 AM

Made my eyes bleed... With epicness.
Sprite needs work though.
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Posted 30 August 2009 - 01:51 AM

This is a little more then decent, but not the best.
I can say you've worked hard on your drawing skills and it's sort of payed off.
Don't let anyone tell you that you have no talent because this is off to a great start!

I'm a bit of a critic so i'll give you a: 6/10 (needing more potential and training)
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Posted 30 August 2009 - 07:31 AM

Not bad, not bad. I know everyone else said this but yea the sprite does need some touching up on. I'll give this a 7/10, good job.
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Posted 22 November 2009 - 11:36 PM

I'd say it's a little better then decent..

Yeah, the sword is curved, and the sprite is okay, but the foot and hands need more work too.

7.5/10

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Posted 17 December 2009 - 01:00 PM

Decent. My one big problem with it is that the coloring appears a bit rough and could possibly use some polishing.

On the other hand, it's miles ahead of what I'd be capable of drawing.

So, in honor of this being Useless Post #5, I'll give it a 4 out of 5.

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Posted 29 January 2010 - 06:32 AM

Alright thanks. I just wanted to make sure to do it right.It Depends on what you're training on.If you prefer to train on holy strong monsters...well soul charge doesn't cut it and some people like the circle thing's spinning around..


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Posted 14 December 2013 - 01:33 PM


Decent, but the sword is slightly curved and the sprite needs work.

7.8/10


7.8? 7.8!? What's with people using decimals without qualifying their scoring system? And what does "needs work" even mean? Are you saying it's too small? Too dark? What?

This comment is like everything I hate about feedback from lay people. 2/10.


Edited by Dopple, 08 April 2014 - 05:26 PM.

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Posted 15 December 2013 - 09:28 PM

Drawn and colored while watching Lisa Lamponelli attempt to be funny.

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Decent? Horrible? Made your eyes bleed? Tell me, I'm curious.

 

 

Hello, bored. (Doodle over drawing because heck if I'm actually going to spend that much time on this.)

 

lool_png_by_nepharus-d6y4c9u.png

 

Pose and anatomy are generally okay, besides hands and legs which need detail consistent to what you've done with the upper body. (They're like a line each away from turning into flesh-coloured mittens/shoes.) To be clear, I don't really care how messed up your hands and feet are. What's important is that you're putting in the time and effort, ie. not hiding or abstracting them, and I think you can invest a little more in this case.

 

For lighting, there doesn't seem to be a proper source, so you might've wanted to choose the yellow floaty for that purpose.

 

Probably the biggest problem here is the black pencil crayon making the picture look messy. The colouring and shading become difficult to read. If you took away the outline, the resulting image wouldn't be able to hold itself up.


Edited by Dopple, 16 December 2013 - 03:10 AM.

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Posted 18 December 2013 - 11:54 AM

For a moment I thought the sprite was a floating, glowing heart.



#12 Dopple

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Posted 19 December 2013 - 06:11 PM

Huh, come to think of it.

 

do one of ShichoMiyazuki's drawings

 

 

Okay!

 

You get brownie points if you noticed the Tenchi Muyo! inspired title. mush1k.gif

Anyways, I'm probably due to post a Maple related drawing since it has been eons. So here you go. I haven't Photoshopped anything recently seeing as my tablet is about to kick the bucket. But I managed to whip up a a little something mush1o.gif

Enjoy~

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source: http://forums.maplet...or-maple-story/ Why this one? I just went into artist's corner and ctrl+f until I found something by her.

 

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since topic is locked w/e. No comments this time, but questions are welcome as always.

 

nvm I do have a comment:

 

 

Thanks for the critique. I made his nose like that because, in reference to the parting of his hair, it shows that he is tilting his head downwards. Thus, skewing the view at a certain angle. His nose would be like that if he were facing front.

 

 

LOL I DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON IN THIS EXPLANATION BUT HE HAS BEAR EARS


Edited by Dopple, 20 December 2013 - 05:05 PM.

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Posted 19 December 2013 - 09:33 PM

words

 

HOLY :halloween: I REMEMBER THAT

 

 

That's some extremely good artwork. Especially how it manages to be Maplestory artwork, but still have realistically proportioned characters. The snail is cute.

Not to sound nitpicky, but the nose on the guy seems a tiny bit too large/the point on it is too low. (It my just be me though. I'm not really good at evaluating art or anything)

 

Was I really such a nicey-wicey nitwit back then?


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Posted 19 December 2013 - 10:34 PM

 

Not to sound nitpicky, but the nose on the guy seems a tiny bit too large/the point on it is too low. (It my just be me though. I'm not really good at evaluating art or anything)

 

Was I really such a nicey-wicey nitwit back then?

 

 

 

The "nitpick" wasn't even incorrect, but there are 528521854 other things off about him and this picture in general. At least the response she gave was gold.


Edited by Dopple, 19 December 2013 - 11:01 PM.

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Posted 20 December 2013 - 11:31 AM

The "nitpick" wasn't even incorrect, but there are 528521854 other things off about him and this picture in general. At least the response she gave was gold.

 

I know, right? Never mind the fact the drawing makes it (likely unintentionally) appear they both have Downs.


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Posted 20 December 2013 - 02:26 PM

Funniest thing to me is that neither of them are actually looking at the snail. The girl's especially staring off into Somewhereland, so I didn't change that.

 

And there's nothing wrong with being nice, really! Sometimes it's the motivation people need to keep going.


Edited by Dopple, 31 December 2013 - 02:23 PM.

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Posted 27 December 2013 - 09:47 PM


I made his nose like that because, in reference to the parting of his hair, it shows that he is tilting his head downwards. Thus, skewing the view at a certain angle. His nose would be like that if he were facing front.

 

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Edited by Dopple, 27 December 2013 - 10:15 PM.

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